After reviewing all the critiques of Dahveed 5 from advance readers, I came to the conclusion that since they all said the same thing, I'd better listen! The book as it stands now is too long, and too confusing, so it's going back to the drawing board. There's a story there somewhere, I just need to find it!
But that will begin after I get back from a book talk in Minnesota, in a town called Excelsior!
